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Tuesday, October 04, 2005

The Smoking Lamp - Av2k's Ant Man #5

Smoking Lamp #55
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The lamp is lit...
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Imprint: Avengers 2000
Series: Ant Man #5
Author: Barry Reese
Title: "Hunter and Hunted, Part Two"

And Barry delivers gratuitous nudity in the first paragraph. Of course, it’s a nude dead woman who when last seen last issue was beginning to decompose while still walking around the house naked, but its gratuitous nudity anyhow.

[Swallows hard] Pardon me, I need to slide my trash can closer.

A gro-bon-ange, huh? I looked it up. Very interesting.

“The scent of sex and spoiled meat…”

Barry, you are a sick bastard. Thanks for the early Halloween gift.

Scott is losing it. Hell, he’s sleeping with his dead wife…he’s already lost it. Maybe it is something to do with the male human’s mind not being able to cope with being miniaturized in the Marvel Universe. Henry Pym lost his cookies a few times over the years. And it’s obvious that Scott isn’t right in these stories. Great stuff.

HA! Saying that Morlun had dinner with the Sinclairs is an understatement. HA!

Her arm…oh gross. Peggy’s…condition is one of the best framing elements of a larger story that I’ve read in mainstream or fan fic in a long, long time. Good job.

The fight scene with Morlun is excellent.

Wow! The ants arranging it so that there aren’t any untoward questions if the Sinclairs should ever be found. That’s a neat idea.

This reads like it should be published. Thanks for sharing it with us, Barry.

I give it 10 out of 10 cigars.

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The lamp is extinguished...Steady as she goes.
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